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    dots Submission Name: Frankensteindots
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    Author: kase
    ASL Info:    27, Winnipeg
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 169/398/234
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsFrankensteindots
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    A body of another's design
    Memories play, but are not my own
    I'll never know a woman's touch
    Because my skin resonates the cold

    Emotions flare into overdrive
    A freak of nature to no prevail
    My name is Frankenstein
    No happy endings or fairy tales

    Another's heart beats in my chest
    I see the world through different eyes
    A resurrection by impure means
    Unfolding a story of lies




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      Finely written. Simply put. But complex emotions and implications. Specially liked the "another's heart" part.
    | Posted on 2014-04-05 00:00:00 | by Snow9 | [ Reply to This ]
      "My skin resonates the cold"- I really like this line.
    I feel like sometimes we've come to a point where we doubt who we really are. I do learned that we should not be too hard on ourselves. This is such a good read..Makes me think:)

    Jen
    | Posted on 2014-04-03 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]


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