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    dots Submission Name: Shadowdots

    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 49
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Look behind me.
    See the shadow.
    It shows the opposite of me.
    It thrives off of the light,
    And can't survive in the dark.
    It is never sad,
    And always smiles.
    It feels no pain,
    and can adjust to anything.
    I am not my shadow..
    It.. Is much stronger.

    Submitted on 2014-03-30 22:35:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Sorry :/
    | Posted on 2014-04-02 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]
      We often separate ourselves from the thing that make up who we are, and often without even realizing it. I think the duality in this whole thing is nice and can appreciate honesty towards the self. Connect with your inner shadow my friend, where you find your shadow you will always find your light.
    | Posted on 2014-04-01 00:00:00 | by Zanitystar | [ Reply to This ]
      Just as the paradox of the mirror portrays an image that often exceeds our abilities to capacitate, so the shade in our shadow wants us to be better than perhaps we are. Humanitarian instinct is not something that most people don't have. Of it's the impetus intrigue in intuitional intrepid. I like to think it's got real verve, like evolutional principle incarnate!! I even get a little bit assimilative about it on the synthesis of synthetics. I can't prove it but I feel it's almost positively xenobiotic, in a safely anabolic way. At least it's a comforting daydream. Good luck!!!

    | Posted on 2014-03-31 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]

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