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    dots Submission Name: meditations on impermanence dots

    Author: trinityfinger
    Elite Ratio:    3.53 - 136/343/209
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    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsmeditations on impermanence dots

    there is something wild
    in how fortune loses its bones
    when backed up against hills
    of the umber and sienna of my home
    traced in the spirals of longing
    and the disturbance of sleepless fretting
    over the material focus I've unlearnt
    and learnt all over again

    so that I
    may grasp the ethereal
    and unwrap moods
    like a present day after day
    unaware of the past
    and how it conflicts with
    a future deck of cards
    I long to hold and remember
    when old and infirm and touched
    by the irrefutable lightness
    of compassion

    I will hold onto all of this
    and sing from my belly
    of the stars and the heavens
    and the earth beneath my toes
    holding onto
    the breath of unborn orphans
    and the shimmer of clasped hands
    over a moonlit night in the forest
    dancing to the emptiness and healing
    of becoming one with
    the stones

    Submitted on 2014-04-01 18:08:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very nice, touching... excellence in spirituality award earned. Nothing like a bit of magic to make one think.
    | Posted on 2014-04-07 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]

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