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    dots Submission Name: Last drivedots
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    Author: quicksorrow
    Elite Ratio:    3.29 - 33/9/8
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsLast drivedots
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    As the wind blows
    Far to the north
    It's been a long drive and thinking
    Of you
    As the road stretch like a vast world on its own
    With the uninvited sound of crickets passing through the car windows
    The moonshine stranded in the horizon
    Never enough to light my way
    I think of


    life


    The sea, waves and to where I must be
    Not to you, not anymore
    Not that I've stopped loving you
    Not that the road won't take me there
    Not that the night must break into daylight to make a way for the sun
    There's no warmth where you are




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