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    dots Submission Name: All I'll Ever Knowdots

    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/The pain inside
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    dotsAll I'll Ever Knowdots

    This is how it has to be now..
    Losing everything.
    My hopes.
    My dreams.
    Of ever being happy..
    I can barely sleep..
    Barely even keep going..
    I can't change it.
    I refuse.
    This pain i feel....
    Is all that makes me feel anymore..
    It is all i know..
    And from what i've seen..
    It's all i will ever know..

    Submitted on 2014-04-02 21:01:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this! Very well written and meaningful, good read.
    | Posted on 2014-04-07 00:00:00 | by PrettyHeart | [ Reply to This ]
    | Posted on 2014-04-03 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]

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