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    dots Submission Name: Infinite Crisisdots
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    Author: kase
    ASL Info:    27, Winnipeg
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 169/398/234
    Words: 78
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsInfinite Crisisdots
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    She rarely responds.
    I barely get to see her face.
    Slowly but surely.
    Love fades.

    A microscopic bond.
    The slightest trace.
    Ultimately and purely.
    She hates.

    This feeling in my stomach hurts.
    Its worse than hunger.
    Its worse than craving a cigarette.
    Its worse than an ulcer.
    This feeling in my stomach burns.
    Then moves up to my chest.
    Its worse.

    The morning breaks new dawn.
    Another feeling of disgrace.
    Criticism and cruelty.
    I've changed.




    Submitted on 2014-04-04 11:25:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      infinite indeed! I always like something deep and simple. You did a good job here.
    | Posted on 2014-04-10 00:00:00 | by jeniecel | [ Reply to This ]
      Breaking of heart is the most excruciating pain in this world. Time heals all the wounds. Time is the best healer.
    | Posted on 2014-04-08 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow great write Kase good job
    | Posted on 2014-04-04 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]


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