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    dots Submission Name: Stages of Lovedots
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    Author: helenastorm13
    Elite Ratio:    0.6 - 0/2/5
    Words: 61
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsStages of Lovedots
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    The stages of love
    Are a mystery to me
    But time passes so slowly
    With you.

    Blinks grow long
    Breaths grow short
    And my heart beats heavy
    For you.

    The moon is in your eyes
    The sun is rising
    My palms sweat
    Against yours.

    The sun sets,
    We take a breath
    Our hearts beat the same
    Rhthym
    Together.




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      reminds of the past I guess, of the fresh new feelings of love, of passion, of the one my heart once cherished, good write, I like the true emotion in this, the pure of feelings
    | Posted on 2014-04-04 00:00:00 | by theinforment | [ Reply to This ]

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