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    dots Submission Name: Balancing Actdots
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    Author: duawrites
    Elite Ratio:    2.82 - 3/3/4
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
    Total Views: 924
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    Description:
       This piece was based on a prompt using 5 random song titles. The songs I used were:

    Waving Flag
    Crucify My Mind
    All That Matters
    Ten Feet Tall
    Oops I Did It Again


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    dotsBalancing Actdots
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    Random thoughts crucify my mind
    As I try to remember all that matters
    In this process, I often forget or am redirected
    Sometimes I fall, sometimes I force myself to hold on
    Often times, I am stuck and I stay stuck
    How cliché but I tell myself: oops, I did it again
    So I try to toughen up, and my thoughts and emotions
    Become so hard, I go rigid
    And then, I become so scared – I am incredibly soft
    Like the filling of a teddy bear
    But I finally find my balance, and know that I
    Need to be -
    like the waving flag, standing ten feet tall




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