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Author: Silenced Hope
ASL Info:    22/male/New York
Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 79 /231 /138
Words: 34
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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I don’t need many things.
I need one thing
A chair
A glass
A knife
A drink
Ya know, simple things




Submitted on 2014-04-13 01:38:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Oi!
I need a dictionary just to read the comments.

Break it all down they are all only words to explain the same thing.
Simplicity...less is more. It's a great motto
You have done that here...that's all you need.
(and maybe a dictionary?)

Peace
Kelly
| Posted on 2014-05-27 00:00:00 | by clay | [ Reply to This ]
  The stolid stoic in staples. The thought of such bastion bulwark aimed stalwart. For a price I can supply these ecstatically euphoric enrapturing mesmerics. Down here at the bizarre bazar we all believe in the blasphemous farcical fugueness, estranged ensemble orchestrations and all. If you want to get away with your flippantly flighty flit-ness you have to do up your stint-ness snity's. It was due yesterday!!!!!!!!!!!

Bruce
| Posted on 2014-04-13 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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