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    dots Submission Name: Blessingdots
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    Author: Ramneet
    ASL Info:    33/F/Boston
    Elite Ratio:    3 - 265/107/52
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsBlessingdots
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    Pain, a blessing in disguise.

    Every soul in this universe
    has endured pain
    in the test called Life.

    Helps in discerning gaiety and being glum.

    Opens new doors, new avenues and new pathways.

    Connects us to Divine, our Creator and our Saviour.

    His name rejuvenates, soothes and pacifies our mind.

    Pain is his benevolence, his grace as is happiness.

    Pain evolves a virtuous being in us.

    Pain, a hidden treasure which is beyond our comprehension.




    Submitted on 2014-04-13 22:25:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Very deep and raw. Grabbed my attention quickly because of the first verse.


    Every soul in this universe
    has endured pain
    in the test called Life

    Fantastic lines, definately a universal feeling.

    Kase
    | Posted on 2014-04-18 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]


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