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    dots Submission Name: There wouldn't have been any hope at alldots

    Author: TheAirWeBreathe
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 5/16/19
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       First love's dull but sweet life and death.

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    dotsThere wouldn't have been any hope at alldots

    Sometimes I think,
    If we didn't fall,
    There wouldn't have been
    Any hope at all.
    Although it hurts,
    When our hearts break,
    Just think of what else
    Was on stake.
    Sometimes I think,
    If we didn't fall,
    There wouldn't have been
    Any hope at all.
    Even still,
    We had braved on.
    A hopeless love,
    Everything wrong.

    Submitted on 2014-04-14 22:35:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It reminds me of a quote that says, "If we don't fall, how will we ever know what giving up is like?". Very good poem that makes people think that it is ok to believe to always take chances
    | Posted on 2014-05-08 00:00:00 | by blackdemigod13 | [ Reply to This ]

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