There wouldn't have been any hope at all

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There wouldn't have been any hope at all

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Sometimes I think, If we didn't fall, There wouldn't have been Any hope at all. Although it hurts, When our hearts break, Just think of what else Was on stake. Sometimes I think, If we didn't fall, There wouldn't have been Any hope at all. Even still, We had braved on. A hopeless love, Everything wrong.

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It reminds me of a quote that says, "If we don't fall, how will we ever know what giving up is like?". Very good poem that makes people think that it is ok to believe to always take chances

| Posted on 2014-05-08 00:00:00 | by blackdemigod13 | [ Reply to This ]

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