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    dots Submission Name: K1dots
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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 288/229/264
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Prose/Serious
    Total Views: 531
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       Diary of a narcissist.

    This one, indeed is personal.


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    dotsK1dots
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    Why does the heart hurt in such selfish ways that
    I care no more if the other is okay and
    My chest heaves as it tries to stretch but
    My breath is so thick I repeatedly choke.

    My words are hard to say because
    All this time spent away was good but
    After a little while of being back I
    Remember all the pain inside.

    I care not for your well-being but
    For the fact that you’re trying to move on and
    Success is in your horizons but I
    Can’t stand the thought of you being with someone else.

    I don’t necessarily love you or
    Need you or dread you but
    I want you to want me more than
    You could ever want someone else.

    I’m a selfish bastard yes but
    It’s more pain than you could imagine trust me and-
    No don’t do so but please
    Don’t question me in the end.




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    ||| Comments |||
      Trust is a form of love, you need to get sum.
    | Posted on 2014-05-04 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      I've definitely witnessed this scene before
    a long list of lost items I'd like to ignore
    neglecting the goods that were
    stripped from our shelves
    we each gathered dust
    while excusing ourselves
    | Posted on 2014-04-19 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
      This was great. Couldnt stop reading once i started. Def been here and i liked your descriptions of heartache, very common but personal so it still differs from any other anguish poem. Good job
    | Posted on 2014-04-18 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]


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