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Author: DaleP
ASL Info:    57/M/TX
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The moon abides in furious white
I pass out in the cold thin air
I float towards the light

I wake in mourning
And death
Is not what I fear
Pasty as a potato
Mashed on a plate
My complexion
Is is a reflection
Of an hour that ran too late

Light filtered through water
A luminescent corral laden sea
I see Nemo
I see you

You are a tousled part
Of sleep's inception
The beginning of
An adventure
like one of Alice where she is
As tall
as she is small
And everything
And nothing at all
Is impossible ;-)









Submitted on 2014-04-19 11:27:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Time to reanimate from the cold thin air, wipe the mashed potato from your chin and pick up your pen :)
| Posted on 2014-09-18 00:00:00 | by ponykeeper | [ Reply to This ]
  Some beautiful things here.
| Posted on 2014-04-22 00:00:00 | by etheror | [ Reply to This ]
  We're all mad here... ;)
| Posted on 2014-04-22 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
  "Yes you'll find your anything right on top when you open your nothing." And although this doesn't perhaps amount to the everything, I of it represents by me of the essence of totality. I think!!

Bruce
| Posted on 2014-04-22 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]
  I think being dead is a lot like the end of the poem... as tall as you are small... a lot like Alice in the Rabbit Hole. I hope nothing is impossible... Because I plan to stick around long after I die :)
| Posted on 2014-04-19 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]


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