Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Sonnet to the Past Five Yearsdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: MadGeologist
    Elite Ratio:    1.86 - 1/3/3
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
    Total Views: 785
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 667



    Description:
       Shakespearean sonnet.


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsSonnet to the Past Five Yearsdots
    -------------------------------------------


    A long, long time ago my friend and I
    Were equal in our camaraderie;
    And brazen in our youth, – but shy, too shy
    To sublimate our bond in ecstasy –
    Defended we our virgin pride that youth
    To us had gifted. We were but naïve,
    And love upon us did not shine its truth:
    And permanence our bond could not achieve.
    Now have those years all flickered, faded, passed
    Away; just five years hence my heart does beat
    Anew. The love unreckoned I amassed
    Is now renounced and lost in sandy heat.
    These five years took a boy and gave a man
    In turn: a pawn to time, which heedless ran.




    Submitted on 2014-04-20 00:26:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      I like it; it really makes people think about going through life and how things change us and shape us into who we are.
    | Posted on 2014-05-08 00:00:00 | by blackdemigod13 | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    198908

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    To the Artist written by HisNameIsNoMore
    To the Devil and Candle written by HisNameIsNoMore
    I, Plutarch written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (1) written by endlessgame23
    winners circle written by ShyOne
    Day 6 written by TheStillSilence
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (5) written by endlessgame23
    Relativity written by poetotoe
    i've missed written by mysalvation
    Vortex: The Imagination That Is written by KeeperOfLight
    Records I written by Raphael
    Shut Up written by annie0888
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (4) written by endlessgame23
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch
    Journey written by endlessgame23
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (3) written by endlessgame23
    Honeymoon written by TheStillSilence
    Lost Inside the Race written by ForgottenGraves
    Lilitu written by endlessgame23
    The World written by jjd
    Reliquary of Writ written by HisNameIsNoMore
    When Sirens Whisper written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Cover written by saartha
    Things They (Don't) Say written by TheStillSilence
    untitled written by ShyOne
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (2) written by endlessgame23
    The Poems Death written by Mepoduo
    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    phantom limbs written by expiring_touch
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry