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    dots Submission Name: The Howling of The Loondots

    Author: Esophagus1
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 231/279/149
    Words: 178
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsThe Howling of The Loondots

    We eat the pain and hold back
    what time could not.

    This pus filled boyle of corruption
    past it's prime of popping
    I fear may have consumed you.

    We fight with all that we are every day
    and still have nothing. Not even hopes for things.
    Still, somehow nothing has changed.
    Goals for the sake of having goals
    Open your eyes to the big picture.

    The World is dying and nothing's being done.
    The World is dying and each of us is alone!

    No one to fix the bullshit. It's up to you.
    Can you stomach what you have to do?
    Not easy nor fun, but keep the aim true.

    Give credit where credit is due
    as you watch all that you love fall to doom.
    Nothing left but dust and the light of the moon.
    In the distance you hear the howling of the Loon
    from your only possession: A prison cell room!

    The World is dying and nothing's being done.
    The World is dying and each of us is alone!

    Submitted on 2014-04-23 20:04:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Okie dokie...sorry for delay.
    I'm not sure if your intent is as straight forward as it seems but this these are my thoughts.

    Human nature, to consume and acquire. "Greed consuming humanity for millions of years."
    There is no fine line anymore...wiped away with the latest condo with sp/oiled ocean view (birds not included, sold separately).
    Will we ever learn. We haven't thus far and the distant future is approaching and at the speed in which fast food joints thrive, I don't think so...but I do so hope so and do what I can to better my corner of this grand, wondrously small world that is going to shit all around us.

    Just a nut from the peanut gallery
    throwing shells your way...they're biodegradable
    | Posted on 2014-05-18 00:00:00 | by clay | [ Reply to This ]
      Holy crap!!!
    How has no one said boo on this!?


    This is absolutely incredible, honest and please do not be offended but I'm going to stash this in favs and convey tomorrow. I'm speaking gibberish and this deserves more.

    Till then
    | Posted on 2014-05-16 00:00:00 | by clay | [ Reply to This ]

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