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Chains of Love©™

Author: kyserin
ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
Elite Ratio:    3.64 - 44 /25 /55
Words: 175
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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xoxoxo's luv on the brain , can't you tell ^_^

Chains of Love©™

I'm a slave to your kindness

Wrap me up in your chains of love

I Never Question this feeling

You are my meaning

I've counted the days gone by

Till I've Felt alive

They get longer , The pain dissipates

Am i Becoming numb

Is My past locking you out ?

But I need you , Yes I need you

You heal my wounds ,

It's you that make me whole

All thats left is taming this heart

I'm wild , I'm a born devil

I've only known destruction

You've not faltered from corruption

The Blood has Seeped in your skin

You are Broken now , But your all mine

I love you , my chains that bind me

Bitter sweet the words to me

Hold me close , Never leave

Submitted on 2014-05-01 10:40:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Ty , edited
| Posted on 2014-05-03 00:00:00 | by kyserin | [ Reply to This ]
  Sounds uncomfortable.
All your you'res should be yours and...

other stuff.
| Posted on 2014-05-02 00:00:00 | by MEGASWELL | [ Reply to This ]

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