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    dots Submission Name: Chains of Love©™ dots
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    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.67 - 44/25/52
    Words: 175
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       xoxoxo's luv on the brain , can't you tell ^_^


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    dotsChains of Love©™ dots
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    I'm a slave to your kindness

    Wrap me up in your chains of love

    I Never Question this feeling

    You are my meaning

    I've counted the days gone by

    Till I've Felt alive

    They get longer , The pain dissipates

    Am i Becoming numb

    Is My past locking you out ?

    But I need you , Yes I need you

    You heal my wounds ,

    It's you that make me whole

    All thats left is taming this heart

    I'm wild , I'm a born devil

    I've only known destruction

    You've not faltered from corruption

    The Blood has Seeped in your skin

    You are Broken now , But your all mine

    I love you , my chains that bind me

    Bitter sweet the words to me

    Hold me close , Never leave

















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    ||| Comments |||
      Ty , edited
    | Posted on 2014-05-03 00:00:00 | by kyserin | [ Reply to This ]
      Sounds uncomfortable.
    All your you'res should be yours and...

    other stuff.
    | Posted on 2014-05-02 00:00:00 | by MEGASWELL | [ Reply to This ]


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