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    dots Submission Name: Fox in Locksdots

    Author: isselman2001
    Elite Ratio:    5.38 - 37/47/46
    Words: 245
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsFox in Locksdots

    Fox in locks

    Cat in a box

    Pigs and wigs with fancy eye socks
    Come to the great animal hearing
    Which the bulls and pugs and dogs
    Are nearing
    With the tick-tock locks appearing
    Mugs and bugs and clugs come nearing
    Fancy fairies, supernannies
    Come to greet the frats and frannies
    Beetle Buttles, pigs in bottles
    Come to join the great big muddle

    And while the buttle beetles bottled by the pigs in bottles battle, the pretentious super nannies with their fanning fanny fannies face the fancy eye-socked shock jocks followed by the feuding foxes tick-tock locked with cats in bursting boxes.

    And to this great big pritter-pratter comes along some lion chatter…

    And the lion chatter lingers over lions who are leery of a lengthy lavatory luncheon launched by lazy lizards lurching by their liver lunching surgeon station stuck in such supreme anticipation as to make the antelopes annul their anxious animation aggravated by the egregious egging on of eloping elephants in elegant elevation of their egg-shaped ears which nefariously note their naking nemeses, the lingering lions’ lingering lion chitter-chatter pritter-pratter bitter batter bottle-buttle-muddle scuttle.

    AND to this great muddle comes along a puddle duddle buddle,

    Who, as it becomes apparent to all pertaining to the pritter-pratter-bitter-batter-battle-buttle-muddle-scuttle, was the sole instigator of this whole bitter-battle-between-buttle-beetles-pegged-in-bottled-bats-by-cats-and-foxes-fox-in-loxes-fancy-fanning-fanny-foxes-supernanny-mugs-and-oxes-bugs-and-clugs-in-pugs-and-tannerwugs-on-boxes-tagged-by-battling-chicks-with-lockses-stockses-clugs-scugs-and-joxes-with-fancy-eye-socks-on-their-hawkses-battling-lingering-lion-chitter-chatter-over-lavatory-wizzards’-egg-shaped-gizzards-making-blizzards-mizzards-kizzards-and-drizzards-on-their-lizzards’-pritter-pratter-middle-muddle-noodle-boodle-poodle-coodle-puddle-muddle-duddle-buddle-scitter-scatter-twitter-twatter-priddle-praddle-muddle-duddle-scuttle!

    But as soon as he appeared, the puddle duddle buddle jumped into the raging puddle-muddle and was never seen aguddle…

    Submitted on 2014-05-02 16:14:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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