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    dots Submission Name: Fake People (Freestyle)dots
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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/807/391
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 1545
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    dotsFake People (Freestyle)dots
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    Everyday i'm struggling fuck the song, it's what I've been living. Fact to the matter is you can say where you once but now that you think you're higher you're superior, remember where you came from, what your thrown was made of. Close to me you're not smarter, funnier, or even clever you're just a puppet to your own demise. And for this I don't have the time. So just to post it up in a rhyme knowing you will never read it. See it. A way to get out what I held at home, sitting in your once upon a time thrown...




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      Lol funny with your jokes, all your throwing are lil facebook pokes. You can't come to my status, driving in a 92 Stratus, when the year 2015 is at us. Thanx for your little comment, but I regret, ima lay you to rest, na just a test, but if I did believe me I would at my best. Again thanx for stopping by, with your cute comment like Hi. And comeback at me when you can try. lol
    | Posted on 2015-04-22 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]
      You thought I wouldn't but I did it, I read it and now i'ma shred it, like wheat, mmmmmm a tasty treat
    Yeah, I'm smarter, funnier and cleverer er er er...
    I gots mad time for the demise of puppets and when I need a seat I steal little miss muffet's
    and the spider runs away, away
    because I threw my throne away, that's right, my throne was thrown away when I was through with being king.

    Do you hear what I hear? Yer school bell's being rung which means it's going ring
    a ling
    a ding
    | Posted on 2014-05-04 00:00:00 | by MEGASWELL | [ Reply to This ]


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