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    dots Submission Name: The All-Consumingdots
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    Author: Esophagus1
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 231/279/149
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsThe All-Consumingdots
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    All-consuming war
    worse than all before.
    No side can score.
    What's everyone dying for?

    Our unspoken contracts have decayed.
    The rope of our trust has frayed
    and now we fight as our sight turns red
    unable to stop until everything is dead.

    Pick out the brain
    of the least insane.
    Live the life inane.
    Socially profane.

    Now we exist only as the act of dectruction
    as if existence had malfunctioned from corruption.
    Then one remembers the universes' pride
    Which will NEVER stop till EVERYTHING HAS DIED.




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      a little extreme. but i get it. war is fvcked. we are fvcked because we let it happen. i think there's hope for survival. granted this generally brings me to the thought of the mirror planet eventually, and the total deconstruction of all WOMD. fvcked up idea that was. Nuclear energy, fvcked up idea that was. Fossil energy Fvcked up idea that was. all for paper that get's people things when that isn't even the chemically stimulating part. window shopping can be just as stimulating. it's just for the superiority mental mind fvck. fvcks.
    | Posted on 2014-05-31 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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