Parent's Blessing by Katlord

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Submission Name: Parent's Blessing dots

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Author:	Katlord
ASL Info:	24/no thanks/my room
Elite Ratio:	2.17 - 375/199/101
Words:	57

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	688
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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I'm not sure if I'm done with it or not, but here it is.

Parent's Blessing dots

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As I count my blessings,
I think of little toes.
Of small smiling faces,
each with a button nose.

Simple broken sentences,
and playing peek-a-boo.
Kissing away 'ouchies',
and hearing "I love you."

It's truly a treasure,
to watch and help them grow.
And teach them all the things,
that they will need to know.

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And I think to myself: What a wonderful woild.
| Posted on 2014-05-12 00:00:00 | by neverthelessi | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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