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    dots Submission Name: Parent's Blessingdots
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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       I'm not sure if I'm done with it or not, but here it is.


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    dotsParent's Blessingdots
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    As I count my blessings,
    I think of little toes.
    Of small smiling faces,
    each with a button nose.

    Simple broken sentences,
    and playing peek-a-boo.
    Kissing away 'ouchies',
    and hearing "I love you."

    It's truly a treasure,
    to watch and help them grow.
    And teach them all the things,
    that they will need to know.




    Submitted on 2014-05-12 11:12:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      And I think to myself: What a wonderful woild.
    | Posted on 2014-05-12 00:00:00 | by neverthelessi | [ Reply to This ]


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