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Submission Name:
Parent's Blessing
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Author:
Katlord
ASL Info:
24/no thanks/my room
Elite Ratio:
2.17 - 375/199/101
Words:
57
Class/Type:
Poetry/Misc
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I'm not sure if I'm done with it or not, but here it is.
Parent's Blessing
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As I count my blessings,
I think of little toes.
Of small smiling faces,
each with a button nose.
Simple broken sentences,
and playing peek-a-boo.
Kissing away 'ouchies',
and hearing "I love you."
It's truly a treasure,
to watch and help them grow.
And teach them all the things,
that they will need to know.
Submitted on 2014-05-12 11:12:12
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And I think to myself: What a wonderful woild.
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