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    dots Submission Name: Insanitydots
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    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.44 - 210/103/71
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    Description:
       found this in an old notebook of mine.


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    dotsInsanitydots
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    Can you hear me?
    Screaming out your name?
    Screaming
    Screaming
    As you walk away.

    You're leaving
    Leaving
    Leaving me behind
    And with these tears
    You've left me blind.

    But,
    In this darkness?
    I've lost my mind...




    Submitted on 2014-05-15 13:13:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      eh. sounds like a lack of stability. insanity is complicated. the fact that you share is good. hopefully you've found more stability, but limit yourself to thinking you're "insane". not growing, not sharing, let's consider that to be insane and do something different. surely we can do this right?
    | Posted on 2014-06-06 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]
      Definately sounds like insanity to me.
    | Posted on 2014-05-29 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]


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