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Submission Name: Insanity dots

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Author:	Teofila
ASL Info:	17, F, with the wolves
Elite Ratio:	0.4 - 210/104/71
Words:	39

Class/Type:	Poetry/Dark
Total Views:	1060
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
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found this in an old notebook of mine.

Insanity dots

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Can you hear me?
Screaming out your name?
Screaming
Screaming
As you walk away.

You're leaving
Leaving
Leaving me behind
And with these tears
You've left me blind.

But,
In this darkness?
I've lost my mind...

Submitted on 2014-05-15 13:13:46 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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eh. sounds like a lack of stability. insanity is complicated. the fact that you share is good. hopefully you've found more stability, but limit yourself to thinking you're "insane". not growing, not sharing, let's consider that to be insane and do something different. surely we can do this right?
| Posted on 2014-06-06 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]
Definately sounds like insanity to me.
| Posted on 2014-05-29 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]

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