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    dots Submission Name: Spring Rain From The Riverbankdots

    Author: Dead Bell
    ASL Info:    23/m/Ire
    Elite Ratio:    2.42 - 48/129/125
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsSpring Rain From The Riverbankdots

    When all clear rain runs through the moods
    Of heavy clearing clouds
    And evacuates the crust of human sounds
    When all clear through the rainy thunder
    Bird notes rise and quiver
    And the blackbird sings his evening songs
    The pook-pook-pook and the chink-chink
    And flies
    Over the green showers of his aria

    Submitted on 2014-05-16 19:55:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      and evacuates the crust of human sound

    Ef fin brilliant!

    I had the clearest vision of a lark taking flight.
    Beautifully done, brava!

    Makes me think of how much of the earth we're consuming. Pushing natural habitats further and further into nothingness.

    Appreciating the beauty of it all...
    | Posted on 2014-05-16 00:00:00 | by clay | [ Reply to This ]

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