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    dots Submission Name: Weakest Warriordots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.42 - 5/111/127
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsWeakest Warriordots
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    Surround me in darkness.
    Show me the pain this world has to offer.
    I have been trained for this right?
    I'm supposed to take it head on.
    Never show pain.
    Never show suffering.

    Yet i can't help but shed a tear tonight.
    Because its nights like tonight that i am expected to be at my strongest.
    And yet i am showing just how weak i am.
    I have failed my duty.
    For this i am sorry.




    Submitted on 2014-05-19 23:13:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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