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    dots Submission Name: Unstoppabledots
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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.42 - 5/111/127
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsUnstoppabledots
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    Don't fight me.
    You can't defeat me.
    I am the unstoppable force,
    And the immovable object.
    You're stuck between a rock,
    And a hard place.
    Both are me.

    Now stare me in the eyes and tell me i'm wrong.
    Tell me you're strong enough.
    Tell me you can beat the unbeatable.
    Prove to me you can win this unwinnable game.
    Prove to me you take back what is your's.

    Then.
    And only then.
    Can you get what you want.
    What you need.

    But we both know you can't.
    It's a shame really.
    You're so special.
    But you're blinded by the dark.
    Blinded.
    By me.




    Submitted on 2014-05-21 22:58:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      as I have already told you I love this one
    | Posted on 2014-05-23 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]
      this was beautiful
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