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    dots Submission Name: Sometimes I Wonderdots
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    Author: Teofila
    ASL Info:    17, F, with the wolves
    Elite Ratio:    0.48 - 210/102/70
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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       Got bored one day and was just thinking.


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    dotsSometimes I Wonderdots
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    Sometimes I wonder
    is God even there?
    I can't think of one
    not one answered prayer.

    Sometimes I wonder
    am I out of my mind?
    Then I just say
    "Nope, just one of a kind!"

    Sometimes I wonder
    why do leaves change in fall?
    I just think that's when
    they're most beautiful after all.

    Sometimes I wonder
    Why am I this way?
    Why do I always seem
    to push people away?

    I don't know why
    I think the things I do.
    Sometimes I just wonder...
    don't other people wonder too?




    Submitted on 2014-05-23 15:01:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Sometimes i wonder
    Why do leaves change in fall?
    I just think thats when
    Theyre most beautiful after all


    These words were very moving. Youre evolving so much as a writer and your work is getting better and better with every post. I miss u come back.

    Kase
    | Posted on 2014-07-14 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]
      I wonder about all kindsa stuff.
    Like, who would win in a fight between Bigfoot and a unicorn? Why does it only rain when I forget my raincoat? Why is pomegranate juice so delicious but pomegranates are so hard to eat? etc and plenty of other stuff.


    I dig yer poem. It's very mostly gentle and sweet.
    Thanks for sharing ☺
    | Posted on 2014-06-03 00:00:00 | by MEGASWELL | [ Reply to This ]
      Yes, everyone wonders from time to time. In it's one of the driving forces of the intellectual advancements of our race. There are those of us who would deny this because they don't want it to be known that they are not all knowing but I think a man would have to be a fool to think that of himself.

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2014-05-23 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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