The poem reminds me of how you may deal with specific people for specific reasons ....... like putting on a mask. The message is clear and to improve I would probably maintain a rhyming rhythm - falter/shatter, frown/(anyone), alright/(fake).
Show happiness when it's real. Foster happiness when it isn't. Symetrical cycles aren't healing. they're isolating a variable and coiling it tighter. seriously try simple things. simple practices. lists of things you like. only positive adjectives etc etc. it can help. trying to hide our pain means we love others, but we serve others more greatly with that love when we love ourselves. just a thought.