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Failed Assignment


Author: ForgottenGraves
ASL Info:    20, Male
Elite Ratio:    0.49 - 5 /121 /135
Words: 94
Class/Type: Poetry /What you did
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Failed Assignment



Never was fit for this job.
To many..
Variables.

For this job you need someone stable.
I am a bomb just waiting to explode.
You also need someone full of light.
I am one who craves darkness,
But this you already knew.

I am sorry that i couldn't fulfill my duty,
But you did this to yourself.
You knew i was broken.
Still you forced it upon me.
You knew i couldn't handle it.
Still you trusted me to get the job done.
And now.... We both pay the price.





Submitted on 2014-05-31 05:54:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Hmm...wonder what this is REALLY about Graves
| Posted on 2014-06-03 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]
  I feel like i've been there before. Epically. but hey there's always work reassignment, getting a new job right?
| Posted on 2014-05-31 00:00:00 | by RyanJoseph | [ Reply to This ]


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