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    Author: ForgottenGraves
    ASL Info:    20, Male
    Elite Ratio:    0.46 - 5/116/131
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Poetry/What you did
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    Never was fit for this job.
    To many..
    Variables.

    For this job you need someone stable.
    I am a bomb just waiting to explode.
    You also need someone full of light.
    I am one who craves darkness,
    But this you already knew.

    I am sorry that i couldn't fulfill my duty,
    But you did this to yourself.
    You knew i was broken.
    Still you forced it upon me.
    You knew i couldn't handle it.
    Still you trusted me to get the job done.
    And now.... We both pay the price.





    Submitted on 2014-05-31 05:54:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hmm...wonder what this is REALLY about Graves
    | Posted on 2014-06-03 00:00:00 | by Teofila | [ Reply to This ]
      I feel like i've been there before. Epically. but hey there's always work reassignment, getting a new job right?
    | Posted on 2014-05-31 00:00:00 | by RyanJoseph | [ Reply to This ]


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