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    dots Submission Name: Brave Hearteddots
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    Author: ineedmorecoffee
    Elite Ratio:    3.02 - 2/2/2
    Words: 110
    Class/Type: Poetry/Legend
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    dotsBrave Hearteddots
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    We believe in incredible resilience,
    We believe in human brilliance.
    We believe in the incandescent golden glow,
    That emits from those daring souls,
    From their lives and loves they departed,
    Those who are strong enough to called
    Brave hearted.
    Those who standout from the rest,
    Those who put their bodies and minds,
    Through torturous tests,
    And with those tridents on their chests,
    They finally feel the need to confess
    To the tear stained faces of their young wives,
    That there is only one true love of their lives,
    And that's this country, they serve to survive,
    That's the true purpose in those
    Brave hearted lives.




    Submitted on 2014-05-31 17:50:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow! Incredible tribute, honestly heartfelt and moving.

    Such a fragile organ to carry such heavy loads but this shows how much it can endure.

    Brava
    Peace
    Kelly
    | Posted on 2014-05-31 00:00:00 | by clay | [ Reply to This ]


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