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    dots Submission Name: Taken For Chumpsdots

    Author: Esophagus1
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 231/279/149
    Words: 117
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    dotsTaken For Chumpsdots

    Laying awake in the sleep of rationality
    unable to do anything.

    I survived the descent of deduction
    only able to watch the rise of corruption.

    All that we need is something more;
    nothing to be bought at any price.
    something that one can't bargain for.

    As everything continues to decay
    I look around and wish there was another way.

    Killing everything gently; a boiled frog doesn't jump.
    Doctors, lawyers, and politicians taken you for chumps.

    Skinless, boneless, people hate themselves here.
    A Slaughterhouse ready to take the steer.

    Ignite the flame!
    Return the blame.

    Honor is nothing to barter.
    Which is smarter? Traitor or martyr?

    Submitted on 2014-05-31 19:26:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I guess it depends on which side they became a traitor to. where did they start. igniting the flame. ugh. it never turns out right.
    | Posted on 2014-06-06 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]

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