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    dots Submission Name: The Most Eloquent Love Poem Ever Writtendots

    Author: RyanJoseph
    Elite Ratio:    4.04 - 14/8/2
    Words: 3
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
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       True Story. ;)

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    dotsThe Most Eloquent Love Poem Ever Writtendots

    I Love You.

    Submitted on 2014-06-02 08:52:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I tend to like to turn simple phrases into conversations. Besides, something that simple could be transformed into an excellent screenplay.
    | Posted on 2014-06-08 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]

    ...you want to hear a secret?

    you are the most beautiful thing on earth.

    That's my secret...

    How the recipient responded.
    | Posted on 2014-06-07 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]

    How on earth shall that ever be surpassed...hmmm but that is it, is it not?! Yes, what more could one say to fill voids that aren't there in these few words.

    *clapping and standing in ovation*

    Stay out of the corners...k...you shine when you're in the herd!!!!

    Moo now I spoke cow

    and now one has come to take me away.....
    | Posted on 2014-06-02 00:00:00 | by clay | [ Reply to This ]
      It prolly should be:
    But other than that...
    | Posted on 2014-06-02 00:00:00 | by MEGASWELL | [ Reply to This ]
    | Posted on 2014-06-02 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]

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