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    dots Submission Name: Mother.dots
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    Author: RyanJoseph
    Elite Ratio:    4.04 - 14/8/2
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       i was adopted by my grandmother. she is a giving heart that never stops giving. i can never repay her for all she's done.


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    dotsMother.dots
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    You sacrificed your freedom,
    so that i would be healthy
    you found the thousand things i needed
    and provided even more for me.

    You raised me as your own, without a question
    you were patient at how slow i'd grown, without resentment.
    i owe you more than i could repay
    so many these things i do, i do so in your name




    Submitted on 2014-06-06 09:25:46     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Your grandmother's love for you is unconditional and immaculate. A great tribute to a grandmother. I loved the sense of your realization of what your granny has done for you.
    | Posted on 2014-06-06 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]
      Yea my grandma helped me out so much while i was in post secondary. Life wouldve been a lot tougher i know that. Great show of personal feelings that are still universally mutual. Short and sweet, all in all good write
    | Posted on 2014-06-06 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]
      That's cool, Grandmas are very special, you better be cooking grandma meals everyday lol that's one thing I loved to do when I stayed with my grandma was cook for her, was one of the best times in my life really, Good write because these true feelings come from the heart, which makes it that much better




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    | Posted on 2014-06-06 00:00:00 | by theinforment | [ Reply to This ]


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