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    dots Submission Name: JohnxRose logdots
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    Author: TheAirWeBreathe
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 5/16/19
    Words: 440
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    EB: * he blushes harder and looks her in the eye * your unbelievably beautiful in every shape and form rose Lalonde, every gesture you and your body makes a shiver run up my spine
    EB: Every word I hang on like some sort of truth about the world...
    EB: And those lips * he cups her cheek and traces them with his thumb *
    EB: One of the many things I find sexy about your body
    TT: *Overwhelmed, her cheeks are now a deep red color. Carefully, she starts to mess with his hair in stead. It was adorable, sticking up in a few places* I c-can't even explain how I-I feel right now...
    EB: Me neither * he moves closer and rubs his fingers through her combed hair making sure not to mess it up *
    TT: God I love you! *In one swift movement, she's gotten him on the bed, kissing him deeply and aggressively*
    EB: * his eyes widen and kisses back passionately and roughly grabbing her ass with a moan *
    TT: *She moans back in response, letting one hand trail down his body as she ran her tongue across his bottom lip*
    EB: Oh god Your tongue * he shivers and licks her tongue back and slowly pulls down her pants then slides his tongue onto her mouth exploring it *
    TT: *she runs a hand up his shirt, struggling to move around his own tomgue to give her own an upper hand in his mouth. *
    EB: * he sucks on her own tongue moaning loudly as he squeezes her thighs gently his tongue plays and dominates her mouth * mmm~
    TT: *She makes small, broken up whines, pulling away to pull his shirt over his head*
    EB: * he pants and helps her he's quite skinny but slightly muscular, he then slides his hands under her shirt *
    TT: *She gasps, his warm hand colliding with her cold skin. Tracing every small detail, she starts to suck on his neck*
    EB: Ahh rose ~ !! * he moans and unclips her bra and rolls on top of her as he pulls off her shirt and bra *
    TT: *She moans loudly, unbuttoning his pants herself. By the time she pulls it off, they both only have one piece of decency left...The barrier between both of their most intimate possessions*
    EB: * he looks down at her and flips her on her stomach and and kisses the back of her neck and trails his tongue down her spine to her panties, he then pulls them down his teeth *
    ectoBiologist [EB] disconnected.




    Submitted on 2014-06-07 11:03:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      uhm heated roleplay? that's what it sounds like. hopefully the jollies were shared.
    | Posted on 2014-06-08 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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