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    Author: MyPeriodical
    ASL Info:    18/m/pr
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 288/229/264
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    There was no taste like her. She was the 99% of the world we don't know. I was blessed to be in her presence; swamp fog at 6AM, no way to get around me, no way to get through me.
    She was a ringing in my ear, but in the range of a spinning disc. I could feel my blood simmer in the cold heat of her speed. She is the sweetest spice I have ever dashed upon my tongue; there, sizzling, then gone, leaving my tongue to burn.




    Submitted on 2014-06-09 15:53:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      quite the spicy one ey? i do love the allure here. reminds me of a woman i use to know. way outta my league, but still same vibe. cool write. kind of fun.
    | Posted on 2014-06-09 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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