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    dots Submission Name: Sally's Mirrordots
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    Author: Glen Bowman
    ASL Info:    70 m Oz
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1140/307/186
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
    Total Views: 856
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 728



    Description:
       This mirror really exists but I have changed Sally's name to protect the innocent, supposing there are any.


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    dotsSally's Mirrordots
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    I'm an Art Nouveau mirror
    With feet like a sphinx
    And riddles between them
    in cosmetic inks,

    Which daily you face
    Though you foam at the mouth,
    Tear out hair, scratch your chin,
    And grotesquely grimace;

    Though my window grows hoar
    From the steam of your gasps,
    Though for clear sight you claw,
    Though your blunted edge rasps!

    But when bleeding you flee
    And when plucke'd you fly,
    Then take from this monster
    Its face and its breast,

    Then the toothless well arm,
    The drip make powder-dry,
    And wield forth for the day
    The last answer you guessed.




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