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notes on the side

Author: isabella
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notes on the side

i was thinking about it the other day -

my ex-husband is still my beneficiary. (i never did change it). he called too, taxes are due, and he's living in a room. God, that makes my heart hurt. but whatever we had, as good and bad as it was, we'll never have it again.

and there is space.

having been mostly single for the last seven years, i find i am grateful for my solitude.

maybe i should become a nun, get my motorcycle license, and make riding a habit.

Submitted on 2014-06-11 07:05:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  ...maybe the time to truly cut ties
has rooted itself like a habit
and m'lady de wolf (a loner herself)
should chase solitude like a rabbit

by paw, or by hoof, or astride a bright hog
(whatever the candidate's choice)
let her find solace wherever she may
in the silence and sound of her voice...

Just a thought.

| Posted on 2014-06-13 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]

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