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    dots Submission Name: Missionarydots
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    Author: annie0888
    ASL Info:    49/f/LA
    Elite Ratio:    4.76 - 327/382/122
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    We save the world, you and I
    souls and salvation intersect at a sacred crossroad
    when I’m flat on my back
    the weight of the world poured into me
    holy spirits ghosting between your skin and mine
    I bear burdens on my hips, wrap ample
    arms around the weary backs of the forgotten
    hold the lost between my thighs
    cushion the seeker against my breast
    we raise each other, again and again
    in this communion of flesh
     




    Submitted on 2014-06-13 00:39:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ha.

    the way youve weaved christian jargon throughout this... i feel like i should think it blasphemous and yet i find it beautiful...

    the way you play on words to create your imagery is wonderful and very creative.

    definately not what i was expecting but so glad i stopped by
    | Posted on 2014-06-14 00:00:00 | by allapo1ogies | [ Reply to This ]
      Marvelous soul communion of a love making scenario. I may dream about it tonight

    Bruce
    | Posted on 2014-06-13 00:00:00 | by monad | [ Reply to This ]


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