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    dots Submission Name: wishing on starz™©dots
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    Author: kyserin
    ASL Info:    30's/Female/ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.7 - 44/24/52
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotswishing on starz™©dots
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    Wishing on stars ™©

    I've wished on shooting stars
    For a love so true

    My wish , never granted
    Till I met you

    Countless days , I've felt
    Nothing but alone

    Nothing is nothing
    An empty heart & soul

    You breathed life into me ,
    This poor dead flower

    Wilted with no love's shower
    You are beyond incredible

    With you I've come alive

    Our love ,so strong & eternal
    It will never wilt or die

    I will cherish every kiss
    For true love was this flowers wish

    Granted so true ,
    When the sun & stars gave me you

    <3





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      Aw. What a beautiful sentiment.
    | Posted on 2014-06-15 00:00:00 | by Esophagus1 | [ Reply to This ]


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