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    dots Submission Name: pretty much the samedots
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    Author: isabella
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    dotspretty much the samedots
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    even comes on odd days. bends around curves and can hold
    a tune. it hugs a road. becomes mist. hangs in the smoke of God
    and on drooping leaves the color of pumpkins. my world goes green. brown. orange. then lays ontop of a mantis, who prays
    in afternoon sun.







    Submitted on 2014-06-17 08:37:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      even meet odd
    like jelly's last jam

    the world has
    a supple wrist

    and the twist
    fools the best of them

    I'd like to believe
    our sunsets

    are mornings
    hung in reverse

    until an eclipse
    blurs all the edges

    and I can't fathom
    which came first
    | Posted on 2014-06-17 00:00:00 | by rws | [ Reply to This ]
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    | Posted on 2014-06-17 00:00:00 | by slingerofink | [ Reply to This ]


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