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    Author: trinityfinger
    Elite Ratio:    3.53 - 136/343/209
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    there are no eagles here
    finessing the clouds as their own eyrie litany

    yonder and all other outdated words
    to ascribe and connote a sense of imparting honesty
    dressed in harmony to the time and memory of a child's toys
    unbroken and simply whole this paradise of my two eyes
    following the angle of a sunrise

    in distorted vision
    afloat and drowning distended and calm
    this blue of a blue within a red circle
    beyond all circles traced
    in the crook of my arm



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