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    dots Submission Name: 3 weeks to reflectdots
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    Author: trinityfinger
    Elite Ratio:    3.53 - 136/343/209
    Words: 67
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    dots3 weeks to reflectdots
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    She knows how
    all life is exploratory
    in passion and purpose

    How desire could never be
    mechanical only, a fusion
    of tendon and muscle, holding onto
    a singular moment, witnessing
    the birthing of a painting in motion

    She, 8 thousand miles
    or so away from here
    knowing I
    love her madly
    and truly.




    Submitted on 2014-06-18 05:11:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    G, said it all!!!
    (echoing her thoughts you!)
    Yep, still rocking you hippy har har you
    Peace pipe
    &
    Peace signs drifting in rings of smoke from it!
    | Posted on 2014-06-19 00:00:00 | by clay | [ Reply to This ]
      i know you don't want comments. so no need for a reply in turn. (smile).

    but this is beautiful j.

    just saying.
    | Posted on 2014-06-18 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]


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