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3 weeks to reflect

Author: trinityfinger
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3 weeks to reflect

She knows how
all life is exploratory
in passion and purpose

How desire could never be
mechanical only, a fusion
of tendon and muscle, holding onto
a singular moment, witnessing
the birthing of a painting in motion

She, 8 thousand miles
or so away from here
knowing I
love her madly
and truly.

Submitted on 2014-06-18 05:11:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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G, said it all!!!
(echoing her thoughts you!)
Yep, still rocking you hippy har har you
Peace pipe
Peace signs drifting in rings of smoke from it!
| Posted on 2014-06-19 00:00:00 | by clay | [ Reply to This ]
  i know you don't want comments. so no need for a reply in turn. (smile).

but this is beautiful j.

just saying.
| Posted on 2014-06-18 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]

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