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    dots Submission Name: Flowingdots
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    Author: 777sacrites777
    ASL Info:    24/F/TX
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 343/189/83
    Words: 88
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsFlowingdots
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    I want to scream
    and pull out my hair.
    I need something to punch,
    something to tear

    to relieve the anger
    that's torturing my mind.
    Whatever it takes
    to leave it behind.

    This hatred inside me
    fights to get out.
    The rage that I feel
    is released when I shout.

    It beats voilently on my door
    until it's finally free.
    When I go ahead and give in,
    the pain is able to flee.

    Adreniline flowing,
    replacing the sorrow.
    Temporarily fixed
    though to return tomorrow.




    Submitted on 2014-06-19 19:20:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      My Leg-Go set has more passion than you.
    | Posted on 2014-06-27 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      There are lots of things in our lives which are not in our control and we need to accept them. The way to accept is to try to see the good part of our lives and just focus on them and move forward. Time will heal everything and the situation will be ameliorated.
    | Posted on 2014-06-22 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]
      sounds like a violent outburst. i suggest a punching bag. an agressive hobby. something there that can absorb the beating. agression is okay. destruction sucks.
    | Posted on 2014-06-21 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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