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    dots Submission Name: Bird-like Wordsdots
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    Author: Ethan Brody
    ASL Info:    35 - M - Chile
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 443/206/79
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Description:
       Wrote this a few days ago. It seems to reflect my current frame of mind. It was partly inspired by a couple of poems written by Sloan Wilson in a novel called "A Summer Place"

    I don't know if it is any good. I kinda like it though ... or more than that I feel grateful that I can still produce some writes ...

    feel free to say whatever you want about it


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    dotsBird-like Wordsdots
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    Sometimes I wish I had a voice again
    For my vocal cords are gone.
    I hanker after turmoil
    And envy those who weep.
    Sometimes, I wish I wouldn’t say “sometimes”
    And wish I wouldn’t wish at all,
    Perchance - that way - words would come
    And find a way to reach my fingers
    Like fowls fly in flocks,
    Defying Aeolus
    So gently …
    Through the wind.









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      i find solace in birds every day. (and i am not even a birder). but yes, who wants to say sometimes or i wish on any given day? it's wispy and wanting all at once.

    words can catch you off guard at times. both when lacking or when abundant. but i find it's hard being patient when you want to express something. anything. it's like this pent-up energy that needs to be.

    seems you found a bit of wind to sail on here.
    | Posted on 2014-07-01 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]
      I spent about 2 years trying to approach writing again, after a long mental shut-down. With it comes all kinds of strange feathers. It's a way to fly, though. Blocking it, though... pieces of you die in the oddest ways.
    | Posted on 2014-06-23 00:00:00 | by Runes | [ Reply to This ]
      inspirational writers block.
    what a convenient paradox.
    i just don't know what to say sometimes,
    'but sometimes i just mirror the thought.
    don't let the fowl fool you
    they paid divine due.

    Ps this was a fun write. in all seriousness, fun to read. thx.
    | Posted on 2014-06-22 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]


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