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    dots Submission Name: Scared of Scareddots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 19/66/84
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsScared of Scareddots
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    Scared of windows
    Of doors
    Of closets
    Cracks on floors
    And under the bed

    Scared of darkness
    Of pain
    Of meds
    Being insane
    And reflections

    Scared of being hurt
    Of loud voices
    Of angry looks
    Being abused
    And hard covered books

    Scared of thoughts
    Of loss
    Of terror
    Keeping the bad
    And making errors

    Scared of sounds
    Of noises
    Of tears
    Letting it out
    And many fears

    Scared of life
    I'm child-like
    There is no light
    No good night
    Only fright
    Crying tonight
    Out of sight
    Not alright
    Cannot fight
    Chest is tight

    Scared of glares
    Short hair
    Not fair
    My skin is bare
    No fresh air
    No real care
    Dirty stares
    Sitting on chairs
    Dark lairs
    Cruel scares

    Scared of being scared
    I cannot prepare
    I don't dare
    To try to bear
    Why I am scared
    So very scared




    Submitted on 2014-06-22 16:48:12     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Boo!
    | Posted on 2014-06-27 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      Damnn, thats alot of stuff to be scared of. Reminds me of myself overcoming my fear of being in a body of water without my feet touching ground. So i just jumped in and faced it head on. So grab a metaphorical life jacket and jump in friend!
    | Posted on 2014-06-22 00:00:00 | by kase | [ Reply to This ]


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