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    dots Submission Name: Super Beardots
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    Author: TeslaKoyal
    Elite Ratio:    1.8 - 19/66/85
    Words: 413
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSuper Beardots
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    At every start there's a path that looks brand new
    But then the ending makes you think the next time through
    That's not quite how it is for you and me
    We'll be together forever, you just wait and see

    There is no turning back for either of us now
    Just hold on tight and we'll get through this all somehow
    Like you've told me many times we'll take it day by day
    As soon as we know it you'll be forever here to stay

    Oh Super Bear
    I know you're out there
    Trapped inside bad memories
    Wishing you could be with me

    Oh Super Bear
    Life seems so unfair
    When it takes you on this kind of ride
    But I will always be by your side

    Sometimes the stars seem so much brighter than the sun
    Nights like we've had before they were more than just fun
    Our life together lately has seemed so far away
    But just remember we'll be together soon some day

    When life is dragging you down, it's dragging me down too
    You ask yourself why I stay, but you know that I love you
    You've helped me through so many things
    Now I'll help you through everything

    Oh Super Bear
    I know you're out there
    Trapped inside bad memories
    Wishing you could be with me

    Oh Super Bear
    Life seems so unfair
    When it takes you on this kind of ride
    But I will always be by your side

    When times are rough just like they are
    Sometimes they leave so many scars
    But we'll get through them
    Like we always do, and...

    Oh Super Bear
    I know you're out there
    Trapped inside bad memories
    Wishing you could be with me

    Oh Super Bear
    Life seems so unfair
    When it takes you on this kind of ride
    But I will always be by your side

    Oh Super Bear
    I know you're out there
    Trapped inside bad memories
    Wishing you could be with me

    Oh Super Bear
    Life seems so unfair
    When it takes you on this kind of ride
    But I will always be by your side

    I said

    Oh Super Bear
    You know I'm right there
    Whispering in your memories
    Wishing you could be with me

    Oh Super Bear
    Life will never be fair
    When it takes you on this kind of ride
    But I will always be by your side




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      Please Bear with while I Snap, Crackle and Pop, or in your wording ways poop on you.
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