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    dots Submission Name: ***dots

    Author: TheAirWeBreathe
    Elite Ratio:    2.64 - 5/16/19
    Words: 50
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Depressed
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    So drop that adolescent notion
    That you can be saved
    No god to stop all of the darkness
    Rotting your brain
    And if you'd rather I forget about the times we shared
    Thats all fine with me
    At least I'll be rid of you
    And i'll be somewhat free

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