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    dots Submission Name: Live for todaydots

    Author: slntfirflm
    ASL Info:    26/F/CA
    Elite Ratio:    5.76 - 301/331/93
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nostalgia
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       Haven't posted on Elite in years! First post since 2007! More to come. Was in a writer's block for far too long!

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    dotsLive for todaydots

    Speak from your heart
    Don't hesitate
    Words may become astray.

    Dance in the rain
    Don't wait
    The moment will surely fade.

    It would be bittersweet,
    at the thought of being able to live forever.
    We all like to play make-believe.

    Embrace in your passion
    as you as you find it
    You don't need regrets in your final moments.

    Live for today
    Don't hide away
    Tomorrow is never promised.

    Submitted on 2014-07-03 02:34:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      All we have really is the moment we are in. I mean who is to say we have another.

    I find these days i scratch things off and add back onto
    my bucket list. I dont want to have regrets. Nor do i want to leave this world on a negative note.

    I tend to say... have at it. It's all ya gots.
    | Posted on 2014-07-05 00:00:00 | by isabella | [ Reply to This ]
      very true. living for today is important. get stuck in the past and nothing happens same goes for the future. the moment is what we experience, most else is just make believe.
    | Posted on 2014-07-03 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]

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