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    Author: Snow9
    Elite Ratio:    3 - 38/21/17
    Words: 28
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    Strung by the flake,
    Trickling beside the smile...
    All found close at hand

    Now it's over

    But stay....

    Submitted on 2014-07-16 06:23:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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