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If More People Knew Who You Are...

Author: C. Starr
ASL Info:    35/yesplz/State of denial
Elite Ratio:    4.22 - 130 /196 /68
Words: 340
Class/Type: Poetry /Angry
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Written 3/26-3/28 2014 About the most disgusting person I've ever met.

If More People Knew Who You Are...

If More People Knew Who You Are, I Would Dress Up As You For Halloween.

Because those 48hours I spent in your presence,
Was the scariest shit I’ve ever experienced.
If you were crazy, bitter or blue…
Then I would just feel bad for you.
But your woes are nothing but blathering.
The ridiculousness of your stammering isn’t even entertaining.
Your stress is simple petty bullshit.
I swear, if you show me your tits once more I’m gonna have a fuckin fit.
Self absorbed, nonsense twat.
Garbage personality twit I want to swat.
Classless cunt.
Mental runt.
Horrible pounds of flesh…
Which only possess the anatomy that makes you a woman.
None of the grace, none of the patience…not even the face.
I said it…you look like a man. And I can barely distinguish you as a human.
You are a disgrace to womankind.
In fact, rather than see you again, I’d prefer to go blind.
I’ll stab myself in the eye,
Before I allow you to stay in my home one more time.
If I do see you somewhere on the road of life,
I’ll read you this little rhyme & destroy your immense un-earned pride.

As you strut around like a slut yet exclaiming the whole time you never thought you were cute.
I wanna scream, I’ll make you uglier with the heel of my boot !
When you repeat over & over that you swear all your friends are taller than you….
All I can think is ‘you have friends’ ? Could it be true ?
Who are these people that would willingly spend time with you before taking a bullet to the head ?
Yes, what I’m saying in no uncertain terms is that to be around you might be worse than being dead.

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  well you surely got a way with hate. idk. i don't see a reason to hate the person. it seems like a frustrated rant more than anything. entertaining mind you. but i'm not getting the why. just the what. which is loads of hatred. good to get it out though. better than im/explosion.
| Posted on 2014-07-21 00:00:00 | by cornonthekob | [ Reply to This ]

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